Determination he wakes
up in the morning ready and awake.
He never complains,
he knows his goal.
Determination always
striding to do his best.
Always reaching to succeed
in his life, to obtain their objectives.
Determination will climb
the social and educational tree
so he can overcome his new challenges.
Determination never stops working.
this is a good poem but i would change or just think about the line "Determination he wakes
ReplyDeleteup in the morning ready and awake" you said he wakes up in the morning ready and awake you already said wakes up so i would take that out but overall it's good